► Submitter:Vizeadmiral Driedrik Sterr ► Recipant: Johann von Kruspe ► Subject:Re: recruitment
Herr Von Kruspe:
The background of your proud family is trully fascinating. Even more so the fact that somehow, you magically have gained access to a cruiser of the Rheinwehr, to the point of directing it into the battlefield. Such talent, obviously, can not go to waste, but nevertheless I decided to test the truth in your words. Mere paperwork.
As you assure you manned this cruiser at around the age of 20, legally you became it's captain. Your name doesn't check in the list, nor has Daumann Heavy Construction produced a new cruiser in the timeframe you speak of. Therefore I take it as that not only did you lie to me, but to the Rheinland Militär and by extension the Bundestag. This prank will be overlooked today and taken as a child's joke. Should you attempt to apply to any Rheinland organizations, I'll make sure your data is double checked. Should we find it is in fact fake again, you'll find yourself facing a martial court.
It'd seem the data you sent in your application has been partially corrupted, the format doesn't check. Normally this would mean it's inmediatly discharged of value. Regardless; as I understand, you've been training the piloting of battleships for... two years? I'm not quite sure I fully understand this. Because your parents were murdered? Ehm.
While we in the Rheinland Militär understand your motives and feel very sorry for the unfortunate events that ocurred to your family, the Federal Polizei should have informed you you must require your transfer to the officer in charge of your division in the first place. As we've not been notified of this yet, we assume you've not taken this first step. Regardless of the posibility of this data being lost due to the corruption in the format of your application, your request can't and won't be accepted until a competent officer of the Rheinland Federal Police notifies us of the approval of your transfer. If you manage to get this allowance, you'll be required to send a new application, which will be evaluated again.
I advice providing further and more detailed information about yourself next time, as well as careful rewording.