This faction won't last even 2 weeks. Want some serious feedback? Here it goes:
1. Ripoffs and imports are a no go, especially on FL, because FL is a roleplay world of it's own, and entities that are brought raw from outside FL simply do not belong here, it's that simple. It's not just about tolerance towards imports, imports simply won't survive here. And that counts especially for content which purpose is trolling. Since trolling is another big NO on Disco. If you want to troll, go in EVE, this is not the place for it.
2. Your write up is as poor as it can get, in fact it's so poorly written, that whilst reading it, I myself started feeling embarrassed lol. You obviously have very little experience with factions. Your idea of something popping out of nowhere, accompanied by a few paragraphs of "Something happened, and I met a lot of friends, made big boom, and abracadabra we now have a pirate faction with the size of a military" won't gonna work. In fact it does not surprise me that most people here didn't take it seriously and went on with sarcastic responses. I'm sorry but your write up is indeed laughable. It lacks the depth and seriousness of other factions. That said, it would probably be a good idea for you to go and read other faction write ups.
3. I'd advise you to join an official faction and get some experience on how things roll here , before getting on with faction forging. Otherwise, if you just want to have a group of pirates under a banner, you don't really need to shape it as a faction on forum. Just go in the server and create a tag.