Hello James Wellson (Eagle_Hunter). I understand that you perhaps didn't had chance to write a lot on forum and RP however, I noticed that you copied @SlowCharge 's application, the application number two in this thread.
This is his below:
(02-16-2017, 04:58 PM)SlowCharge Wrote: IC Information:
Character Name: Jason Williams
Place of Birth: Rochester base
Age: 24
Previous occupatiot: Pirat
A short biography:
I was born at Rochester base. My mother died when I was 6. My father and I went on a vacation to Omicrons and he left me Freeport 9. I was looking for him but he never returned. As a young couple took me and raised me, when I reached 20th birthday my stepfather bought me a Eagle fighter . He showed me how to fight in it. I didnt have money and then one day I met a stranger in a bar. He offered me to join him and to become pirate. As I had no other choice, we we started pirating together. One day we came across Order cruiser. It opened fire on us immediately. As we ran to Omicron Minor it followed us all the way. We meet a group of Nomads there. They destroyed the cruiser in no time. We thanked them and returned home. Next day I wandered to Omicron Minor. I was still realy happy about what the Nomads have done. On my way to Minor I met again another Nomad. I was so grateful that I asked it how could I return the favor. It said: "You cannot join us. You are different, but you can join Commune, and fight with us together". I agreed and then I decided to protect them with my life and return the favor.
Reasons for wanting to join: Help nomads and be a good member of Commune.
OOC Information:
Previous experience on server: I'm 8 months old on the server.
Which other factions are you in: none
SKYPE name: SlowCharge
And this is yours:
(06-03-2017, 03:27 PM)Eagle_HunTer Wrote: Character Name: James Wellson
Place of Birth: Rochester base
Age: 21
Previous occupation: Trader,Pirate
A short biography:
I was born at Rochester base. My mother died when I was 6. My father and I went on a vacation to Omicrons and he left me Freeport 9. I was looking for him but he never returned. As a young couple took me and raised me when I reached 20th birthday my stepfather bought me an Eagle fighter. He showed me how to fight in it. I didn't have money and then one day I met a stranger in a bar. He offered me to join him and to become a pirate. As I had no other choice, we started pirating together. One day we came across Order cruiser. It opened fire on us immediately. As we ran to Omicron Mi
nor it followed us all the way. We meet a group of Nomads there. They destroyed the cruiser in no time. We thanked them and returned home. Next day I wandered to Omicron Minor. I was still really happy about what the Nomads have done. On my way to Minor I met again another Nomad. I was so grateful that I asked it how could I return the favor. It said: "You cannot join us. You are different, but you can join Commune, and fight with us together". I agreed and then I decided to protect them with my life and return the favor.
Reasons for wanting to join: Help nomads and be a good member of Commune.
OOC Information:
Previous experience on the server: i'm 3 years old on this server
I mean, come on. It's not that hard to imagine your character's story out of nowhere. And we're looking for pretty much basic stuff, as you could see from the previous applications.
Your application is on hold. We're giving you a chance to re- attempt to write YOUR OWN application and then, if it is good, we'll accept you.