- What is your ZOI, or are you only going to be RP'ing logging to fly around Barrier gate?
A lot more questions i have, but those are the main ones that come to mind.
Now, the concern I have is you list two of the major presences ON Barrier Gate as Suspicious. Sure the info card makes mention that the residents of Barrier are unsure which way to go with Colonials (Either a risk or market for goods). CR has been there for a very long time (I know, I used to lead CR|), and Barrier gate sells bribes for CR. Same with IMG. Barrier sells IMG bribes there. Hell the info card for Barrier gate states IMG use it as a refuge and suggests IMG help with incoming revenue. So I'm quite confused why you have them listed as Suspicious, when in the infocard for the station it states otherwise.
The biggest concern is why you don't have Rogues, Outcasts, and junkers as suspicious, considering again, the infocard states that Barrier is fighting off attempts of a takeover form those groups, yet you have them listed as Friendly.
All in all, my suggestions is to really outline the faction, as well as do some more research on the infocards and the "rumors" that are in the bar area for Barrier, as well as look at what the RP has been in the past with the groups.