I feel there good idea, but you made mistake reveal all in write up. This is would've much more interesting if you have made write-up in way like full legal commercial corp which covert intelligence operations. Like low-rank members just join it, freelancers work for it, but from some moment, they begin realise they became a agent, pawn and cannot leave it.
I feel more good would've make only allusions on conspiracy in first write up, and begin slowly reveal it inRP way after some time. Dont know, how you will play it now, because its really like another Order/Aux things. But anyway i will look how far you'll go, it's interesting.
