Bretonian Ship of the line class warship

[Jinx]

the first impression:

gosh, what a mess. ( but thats what "first" impressions are all about )

second glance:

interesting shape - especially the second render. - the model itself is good, but again, a bit too much in the "anime" line of designs ( due to the long extrusions )

now - the ship does not show what appears characteristical for bretonian capial ships..

- its not looking massive ( no problem, just an observation )
- its not really following any known FL designs ( no problem either, just an observation )

the texture is a bit too undetailed, but i m no good at it either, so i cannot really comment on it.

the idea of the 6 sideways turrets is good. - the whole concept is very good, too. - but if the ship wasn t red / white - i wouldn t associate it with bretonia - in so far, i agree with some of the precious posts.

a way to fix that would be to modify it a bit so it looks much more massive - like at least twice or three times as massive / heavy.


edit: i might add that its one of those ships that one might not instantly love at the beginning - but the longer and the more you look at it, the more you see how it grows on you.

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