Bessie Bishop feedback thread

[Big Bison Bessie]

I figure now that I have actually written a little story, I may as well post a feedback thread. Bishop is my flagship character on the server and I use her for most of my interactions, so you may have seen me around flying her.
In the briefest possible description possible, Bessie Bishop is a former Liberty Rogue turned BHG pilot.

I may write and post an official bio at some point in the future, but I am more interested in writing episodic adventures for her.

I will provide a link to her story thread here:
https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthrea...id=2336306

I plan on writing and posting new episodes every so often. Originally I wanted to have multiple episodes ready to post at once, but I decided to just wrap up one entry and make it really solid and post it and take care of a few other side projects before writing more. I will post here in this thread whenever I post a new entry for her.

Let me know if you guys have any questions, comments, or feedback for the character I play in the game or the writing I do for her.

I may throw some art for her in here that I have done up as well, which I will just add into this section below here

And if you read my writing, thank you very much.

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