The faction info looks much better! Good job on that. The only nitpick i may have is that the font size could be a bit larger so it's easier to read.
Another suggestion to add flavor could be to give a small explanation why you are friendly or hostile to some of the factions mentioned in your diplomacy tab.
I mean sure: Liberty, Nomads, Pirates is obvious why and don't need no explanation. But it would be interesting to know why factions like Lovelace Circle or Rowlett Aerospacial Research Group, 2 groups i didn't have the honor of meeting ingame yet, are considered unfriendly to Orex.
Again this is just something to add extra flavour but is not necessarily. Good luck with your OF request!
