Meh, I dunno. I think the render fits; kind of sad, yet somewhat condescending as well. I'll see what it looks like with the other one, anyway. As for the color on the text, it's the same as the background. (Overlay o.O) What would you suggest? Other colorings just make that part too plain.
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