The Hessians.
Who live and exist in dense asteroid/lava/gas/radiation fields.
Building a massively large, ungainly and completely newly designed Battleship.
Why do those lines not work together?
Battleships are used for mainly defensive purposes in Freelancer it would seem. As highly immobile but yet moving weapons platforms that are set up in an area and then the area is secure. They tend not to be used by highly mobile, hit and run specialist pirate factions.
The model itself is a bit..insecty. Doesn't look like any FL design, which would not fit the Hessians, or any other traditional faction really. Best bets might be Zoners since they would have different groups, different ideas etc and the materials to build such things.
The legs are a bit..odd though and the model otherwise is far too plain. The main body is really undetailed and needs changing.
Other than those concerns, it's definitely got potential to become great.