The Power of Man was made invisible by Dusty, and the story I put above is basically the Power of Man re-written, I just haven't finished it yet (I SHOULD be revising *Looks guilty*)
I managed to get a pirate today to tell me that he was evil, and yet found me pure evil and disgusting, so that's good:)
I'm trying not to be too boring while not being Pew Pew Pew, as I said. It's a difficult balance.