23rd Armed Forces Detachment (Border Patrol)

[Wolfs Ghost]

So if I understand right you are going to police the boarders right? And not get involved in military conflicts? If this is so than wouldn't it sound better to say that your were a Boarder Patrol Agency? How about naming it Bretonia Boarder Patrol?

To me it makes more sense, to do that. And also what if Liberty and Bretonia developed hostilities they would take entering boarder systems as acts of aggression by 'military forces', with it being an anti-pirate thing boarder patrol seems to make more sense, especially since you will not necessarily be the police force for all Bretonia.

Just a few thoughts, hope they help.

Would rather think of it as a Border Patrol detachment rather then an Agency.

As far as Liberty taking any movement into Cortez/Magellan, as an act of agression, wouldn't really happen. Liberty and Bretonia have both signed the Treaty of Curacao, which allows both house militaries to police and maintain a presence in both Cortez, and Magellan.

Sounds fine to me.
Your RP'ing a detachment of the BAF and not the the whole thing, so thats ok. Im going to assume you would obey BAF Admirals orders as well.

Yes they would obey BAF Admiral orders, after all they 23rd's leaders are Captains.

Calling them ther 23rd just makes me think of American Military Units a.k.a Liberty, that already has numbered mini-factions. I think giving them a nickname of somesort rather than a Numbered tag would make you stand out more as Bretonians. Somthing like "The Iron Wing" or something like that would be fitting I think.

The name randomly came to me but I'll see what I can come up with.

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