Hannah

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You've certainly put alot of time and effort into constructing Hannah's story, and it shows with a quality story that I continue to enjoy reading about. I like how the main story is written in first person. It makes the story more immersive as you start to imagine yourself as Hannah when she describes what has happened.
The inclusion of Hannah's arch nemisis Victor, (kudos to Buster ) is a nice addition to the story, as you get to see her in action. And Its always a pleasure chatting at the West wing pub;)