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My first real attempt at forum roleplay.

MB52

09-18-2009, 07:06 AM,

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Its a good read, a few minor (and I mean very minor) grammar issues. Your writing style is pretty good, plenty of good descriptions and dialogue.

I say when you do get the chance keep writing, its good.

Iâll carry this flag
To the grave if I must
Because itâs flag that I love
And a flag that I trust

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My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by Pinko - 09-14-2009, 03:38 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by RonG777 - 09-14-2009, 03:50 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by kingvaillant - 09-14-2009, 03:55 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by Marburg - 09-14-2009, 04:03 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by Pinko - 09-14-2009, 04:03 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by obnoxious1 - 09-14-2009, 07:30 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by Exsiled_one - 09-14-2009, 08:37 AM

My first real attempt at forum roleplay. - by MB52 - 09-18-2009, 07:06 AM

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