Thank you for your time and interest in the Rheinland Military Herr Scholl.
Would you please answer the following questions before I will put it under review?
For how long have you been playing on Discovery?
What made you come play on Discovery?
What other characters do you have on the Discovery server?
What OOC reason do you have for joining the RM?
Also I would like to see you putting a bit more efford into your application background.
Build in a little background story for your character and maybe go away from the average application with "his parents died due to criminal house faction x"
Our faction is a heavy roleplay oriented community, this is why I would like to see a bit more efford in your story.
Also get your character something to eat, he seems to be a bit too lightweight.