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ejoman3002

06-29-2010, 05:27 AM, (This post was last modified: 06-29-2010, 11:47 AM by ejoman3002.)

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Hey just wana know what people think about this. Its my first story so Constructive critisism will be welcome.
havnt worked on it for a while so im gona see the comments to see whether its worth continuing or not

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...86&hl=heist

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