This is a very good Faction page, even better than our own [RM] one, but as an longtime RM member i have to say there had been several attemts to make a second rheinland military faction in the past, that were faced with different problems and in the end were discontinued.
To your apearance, to put fighting skill over the fun in the play and scaring off new recruits by harsh requirements, tests and trying will get you nowere and will not get or even loose you the respect of other playergroups. Most players want to have some fun, do some roleplay and have some fighting, a good balance is needed, or your apearance in the game will be very one sided.
And your focus on the Omega-system mainly to saveguard the Dauman operations there (shameless assumtion) may not be blessed since the admin team has declared war on the O-7 mining (or was ist only the Dublin mining, didnt read it all)
Again, you have put a lot of effort in the proposal, and my personal experiance with WRF players in Game were good, I have trouble in beleaving it will work out.