I absolutely love creepy pastas about games and cartoon movies and this, well i don't know if it's perfect, but it's certainly not bad.
I feel that the ship-planet hybrid thingy with teeth is bit out of place though.
Thank you all!:DMaybe I can change the ship-planet thing to something else, thank you for the feedback!
This is the result of reading creepy stories for hours and not being able to sleep.