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Oh yeah...

And it is rumored that the last words of Goethe ( german writer/poet) were "more light" (thats where I got the idea that the nomads ue mind tricks with darkness to get the humans to kill each other), when things got dark aroudn him while he was dying.

And the first name "Simon" means "the seer" in hebrew (I think, at least I heard that somehwere). SImon Goethe is actually not a huge coward like Miguela thought, but has the ability to see the future, and what he sees scares him (cause he foresaw his own death, and that it would be better to head back to base now, and he was scared of miguela cause he could feel that she would kill him one day). That Simon the Seer part is ripped off from the book "Lord of the Flies" by some british bloke, were you dont really notice it unless you read the book twice. Simon also gets whacked and foresees hish deathin the other book.

I wanted to expland a bit on those two parts, maybe I'll re-write the story a bit to make it more clear, or make same some flashbacks were Goethe is still alive so it can be guessed.