What you did with her tattoo and her eyes is nice but the rest is... not what I'm looking for.
- I don't like this style with undetermined borders
- The background doesn't interpenetrate with the char
- Where is my Sabre?:P
- You cut her head:(
- I can't see her shining cross at her neck...
- To be honest, it needs to be remade, sorry
Please tell me if you're willing to try again. If not, schlurbi gets the 60 mils and Anomander the other 30.