Joe Nikle's Diary

[Luis]

So yeh, I writing a story that is putting some of my real life history and fiction story together on making a character.
Character is known as Joe Nikle that have moved to Manhattan with his family in seeking for a better life. Although Curacao was an okay place - family didn't want to stay their life on a planet they were born on. Joe is having a little trouble finding a job. The story would continue slowly as I gather up ideas for it.

What I really want from the community is:

-Grammar & Spell check (for those who are really good writers that have time to read through the small story and point out my mistakes).

-Your feedback!:)

Edit: Joe Nikle's Diary, A new Life!

THANKS IN ADVANCE!