Feedback for Yuki Arakaki

[oZoneRanger]

I applaud your effort mate, but the colors are to much for me. Very distracting, doesn't let me concentrate on the story line. I spent my time trying to figure out if the colors actually fell into some kinda patters, like thoughts of characters in red, or actions in blue and so forth. If there is some method to the color madness, maybe a ledger or guide to help us along in understanding it. If as you say, you are using colors to indicate who is talking, then I would say it would flow better for a reader with a rewrite and no colors. oh..and hey, not disrespecting the content at all, just the format is a bit much for me.

Cheers.
oZoneRanger