I've been reading your diary (I've only read up until the New Berlin entry) and I have to say, I like the style. Having the Spanish words interspersed in your diary really adds something to your writing and gives Lee much more character. I've spotted grammar errors while reading your entries, but for the most part, your English is very good.
Keep writing these. Your entries have really helped make the Discovery universe more alive for me. I just started playing yesterday (despite having an account here for a long time...). Before I read your diary, I was just flying around making some small trades in the system. After I started reading your entries, I began rping and making sure everything I was doing had a legitimate reason behind them (and not just trying to make money fast).
So thank you for your hard work! I'll be sure to say hello if I ever see you. I'm currently freelancing for the Junker base in Philadelphia as my friend introduced them to me and we set up a trading deal.