Being the RP extreme critic I am I'd normally say it was kinda boring, good but boring. Though with some more elaboration it could get better. Maybe end up integrating it within another RP thread or event even.
Don't take it personally, I just like RP perfection. :wacko:
Fellow Hoodlum,Aug 29 2006, 12:37 PM Wrote:You carry on Marauder ... Its a good story as to how you came by the ship ...
Alot better than some around at the moment.
I personally don't view this as a " How I got the ship" the character he plays in game isn't 'him' it's a drone that was made by liberty... So IMO this in itself is a whole tier above "How I got the ships"
Also; there aren't really a whole lot of threads about "How I got this ship" Only ones I've seen are mine, a few one liners (lame) and thats about it.
**IC**
Date: 2 days since liberation from oppressors
Location: unknown, gulf between systems, 869 km from magellan jumpgate
After about a day the cruiser stopped cruising and slowly turned around. It then headed back to the jumpgate and then cut it's engines, drifting silently.
Onboard the dreadnought the robotic crew were hard at work upgrading most of the equipment and systems with parts looted and adapted from the destroyed escorts.
One group of robots was gathering all the junk, obsolete and useless parts from all over the ship and taking it to engineering.
There the massive, heavily armoured robots (designed to clean and service the main reactor) were melting all the scrap metal down, to be made into new parts and equipment.
Several construction machinery unit where sitting in the hold, there wasn't that much, which was why the ship was heading back into california.
The idea behind their use was to reinforce the ships original armour by using the construction machinery to fill in most of the rooms and corridors that weren't used or needed, mainly becuase they were for the human crew, with the same material used to build and armour the hull.
The cruiser was surrounded by a massive cloud of debris, loot and escape pods.
As it sat there occasionally tractoring in the odd pod or container of goods a strange ship with four large fins crept into sensor range and sat there watching.
'Strange, it's deliberately keeping out of range so I can't check it's ID.'
The prototype was confused, most ships that saw her ran away, or tried too... So she moved closer to the strange ship, but everytime she got close enough to scan it moved again. Slowly it drew the cruiser out into the clear space between the two icefields.
Then it dropped a something from it' cargo bay and ran off into the barrier.
As the cruiser passed it tractored the item into it's hold where a robot was waiting. It carefully opened the metal case and took out a large book, entitled 'The Principa Discordia'.
The prototype had the robot bring it to her at the heart of the main computer, then she dismissed it and started to read...
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