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Fletcher · (This post was last modified: 10-25-2008, 01:13 AM by Fletcher.)

All right I've been asked by a few people to take a look at the stories, I'm going through editing some. I'll concentrate after work tomorrow, I'm in no shape to do it tonight. Too much drink and a great memorable night in Stradey Park, last match ever.

Whatever the reason, I'll be doing it tomorrow.

"Oh chuffing blimey, another day, another person being whiney!"
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Orin · 10-25-2008, 01:19 AM,

I'd love feedback on Broken Skies.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=23814&hl=

I'm fairly certain it needs no editing, but feedback would be nice.

Fletcher · 10-25-2008, 01:20 AM,

Minions get to work:P

"Oh chuffing blimey, another day, another person being whiney!"
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Dra1003 · 10-25-2008, 01:51 AM,

well i could use feed back on this http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=24026&hl=

and MAYBE this http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=25138&hl=

ive been wrighting tons of bio's lately and im working on yet another one now but i only want suggestions for that bio and the story

Note: fletcher thats awfully helpful of you :)

Ive had enough of disco for now. I might be back at the next mod release.
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The Master of all things cyborg

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Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 10-25-2008, 07:50 AM by Mike_Fire.)

Hello community of discovery.

Here is all my stories and data's link.

.Mike Fire data and story

.Rick Gunner data

.Jeff Willdor stories and data

.Prototype.cyborg-T1 data and communication channel

I'm having fun with my cyborg. Don't know what I'm doing, All he does atm is exploring.
I hope to get more encounters with that characters. To see how the players will react.
Also this char uses only the money he will make on his discovering. I only made one trade. And I'm almost out of cash.
I'll have to find a way other than trading to earn money with this CSV.

If you have time to read... All feedback is welcome...and thanks if you do...
It would help me a lot.

EDIT: I have corrected things in captain jeff data. It was a mess and very confusing. Well if you get confuse tell me coz there might be things i haven't corrected.
Also I have added pictures of the Crew.
Hehe Now i got a face for each character.:yahoo:

Strontium Dog - Rookie Mike Fire - Bounty Hunter Card 
 The Freelancer Captain Jeff Willdor's Log, Luxury Liner "Exodus" 
Liberty Navy - Lieutenant Rick Gunner
Cyborg-Durango.Flore - Story - Data & communication channel
 The Freelancer Vick Blaster's Log - Hunts Nomad/Wilds - He will join forces with The Order 
Help us to grow up by clicking on us =>

<= don't forget our parents family too.
Click here to see the dragon family

10-25-2008, 03:52 AM,

Well, Im making a BIG buy, and i dont want to be bashed for not having a good enough RP, so here it is, the finished Product.

Hugo Hirschfield.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=25870

Fletcher · 10-25-2008, 07:23 PM,

Wah so much reading to get on with :wacko: I'll do it ASAP. I got the day off tomorrow (I hope) I;m wrecked, but I will read them! And leave feedback. For now before I go up the club, I'm going to 'evolve' one of my RP's.

"Oh chuffing blimey, another day, another person being whiney!"
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Fletcher · (This post was last modified: 10-26-2008, 02:06 AM by Fletcher.)

' Wrote:Well, if you are really bored, I'd love some opinions on my Valhalla Rising story. My feedback thread got ignored =p

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=18024

I dont really care too much about spelling/grammar but just if the story is going ok, if it makes sense (of doesn't.. etc)

I'd appreciate it =)

I told you I'd get through it! I did too! Reviewed and edited with grammar and stuff updates.

That story is awesome! For those with patience. Read it. Do it now. Now I tell ya!!

EDIT: I am tired now, I want to play a game of Freelancer before I die. Oh and Men of Honor is on too. Great film.

"Oh chuffing blimey, another day, another person being whiney!"
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MB52 · 10-26-2008, 07:40 AM,

' Wrote:I told you I'd get through it! I did too! Reviewed and edited with grammar and stuff updates.

That story is awesome! For those with patience. Read it. Do it now. Now I tell ya!!

EDIT: I am tired now, I want to play a game of Freelancer before I die. Oh and Men of Honor is on too. Great film.

And I thank you greatly for the feedback it is much much appreciated. Only problem is the last PM you sent me is blank when I open it...and I can't read what you said... (I know you said something because in the "preview" pop up it showed some text, but the text disappeared when I went to the full view...)

I'm not sure what the deal is... but you may have to resend what you sent, or fill me in on it... :(

Iâll carry this flag
To the grave if I must
Because itâs flag that I love
And a flag that I trust

Fletcher · (This post was last modified: 10-26-2008, 06:03 PM by Fletcher.)

' Wrote:And I thank you greatly for the feedback it is much much appreciated. Only problem is the last PM you sent me is blank when I open it...and I can't read what you said... (I know you said something because in the "preview" pop up it showed some text, but the text disappeared when I went to the full view...)

I'm not sure what the deal is... but you may have to resend what you sent, or fill me in on it... :(

I resent the PM, but the edit is now in a rich text document. I must have gone over the word limit in the PM. The story was around ~12,000 words long!:D

Time to help some more! Only got 20 minutes before food in my Grans up the road...

EDIT: Added a list of what I need to do.

"Oh chuffing blimey, another day, another person being whiney!"
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