The engine portion looks quite neat like that, but a bit less of the glowing toward the front would be good.
In any case, is it just me, or has basically everyone acquired the Osiris plans by this point in time? But more importantly, why does it seem Liberty lets all of its ships get taken? </tangent>
I think it's over the top, a little more restraint in the glowiness would be nice, and all the blue iridescent bits should be reduced in number as well. Regardless they should look more functional and less decorative.
make the black more metallic if possible and change the blue to pulsating red,
It would look more Evil and it would look like it would fit in, its too bright to be scary at the moment.
' Wrote:Once a Man who are Selling Ships see an Big Battleship he Ask the Commander from the Battleship that he want to sell this ship, but the Commander wouldnt he say I have an binding to this ship I dont sell this ship for All Money in Sirius so as the Commander and his Crew at Freeport 9 sleeping the Man and his Pirates the buy for much money going into the ship and stole the Battleship Next morning as the Commander and his Crew go to there ship it was not there...
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The greatest Roleplay ever of an Outcast Battleship being "Stolen"