I've been reading your diary (I've only read up until the New Berlin entry) and I have to say, I like the style. Having the Spanish words interspersed in your diary really adds something to your writing and gives Lee much more character. I've spotted grammar errors while reading your entries, but for the most part, your English is very good.
Keep writing these. Your entries have really helped make the Discovery universe more alive for me. I just started playing yesterday (despite having an account here for a long time...). Before I read your diary, I was just flying around making some small trades in the system. After I started reading your entries, I began rping and making sure everything I was doing had a legitimate reason behind them (and not just trying to make money fast).
So thank you for your hard work! I'll be sure to say hello if I ever see you. I'm currently freelancing for the Junker base in Philadelphia as my friend introduced them to me and we set up a trading deal.
' Wrote:I've been reading your diary (I've only read up until the New Berlin entry) and I have to say, I like the style. Having the Spanish words interspersed in your diary really adds something to your writing and gives Lee much more character. I've spotted grammar errors while reading your entries, but for the most part, your English is very good.
Keep writing these. Your entries have really helped make the Discovery universe more alive for me. I just started playing yesterday (despite having an account here for a long time...). Before I read your diary, I was just flying around making some small trades in the system. After I started reading your entries, I began rping and making sure everything I was doing had a legitimate reason behind them (and not just trying to make money fast).
So thank you for your hard work! I'll be sure to say hello if I ever see you. I'm currently freelancing for the Junker base in Philadelphia as my friend introduced them to me and we set up a trading deal.
That I call some positive feedback. Thanks a lot. Much appreciated.:ylove:
I didn't read through my entries yet a second time. Maybe I should do, to fix some grammar mistakes.
Most times. I write those entries while still being in space, so I don't forget any details. And being in a hurry then might have caused most of the errors. But the fact, that Lee's native language isn't english... oh well.:rolleyes:
Hi Narcotic,
i have to agree with DarthMori in every aspect. I was unsure about the way to play here on the server and Your journal was one of the first i´ve opened. I like the story of Lee and this dark atmosphere around his character, i can feel the demons he has to face...
And as stories like Your´s here also put the salt into the soup they became a good advice how to start a hopefully good role play by myself.
And so i´ll wait for the next part of the "Lee" series cause i love to read good stories...
' Wrote:Hi Narcotic,
i have to agree with DarthMori in every aspect. I was unsure about the way to play here on the server and Your journal was one of the first i´ve opened. I like the story of Lee and this dark atmosphere around his character, i can feel the demons he has to face...
And as stories like Your´s here also put the salt into the soup they became a good advice how to start a hopefully good role play by myself.
And so i´ll wait for the next part of the "Lee" series cause i love to read good stories...
Greetz, Carl
Thanks for your Feedback, Carl.
Great to hear that others do read, and even like my stories.:)
There'll be more soon.
In my opinion, it's not much about it, but if there's going to be a problem, I'd like to be informed in private. We're talking about RP stories, and I really tried to stick to the restrictions.
Anyways, I'd like to apologise in advance, if I offended someone or whatever it could be.
Of course I'll remove said extracts if forced to.
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