Well, as a picture all the necessary elements are there, and I do like the image of the girl very much, (thought I'm still trying to figure out what that big lightning-ey thing is) but I do think the text needs to be moved farther up the picture, made dimmer and to blend into the background better, and maybe separate it more and stagger it a bit? Also, the empty space on the right side of the screen needs a filler...
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