Far back into the past was present in a big unit-Omicron Legions. But after hundreds of years, they were attacked by the Colonials and Councils at once and most of the Omicron Legions was destroyed as well all the Bases which was the house of them.
So two months ago, died two older commanders. I am Andrew Langkow and me with some of my closest friends who are from Legion eather are looking for partners who is remaining from
Omicroner Legions all who conceal their identities.
We want to renew our strength and revenge Council and the Colonials for the big disaster what was made from them and now they will get big revenge. Places where we can pull our selves back togetheracross and get a large and strong family is Freeport.
In the Legions pioneered big part was important from Zoner because they helped us improve and hopefully this time they do not refuse us.
Lets do this.
Andrew: for the revival of ''The Omicroner Legions''
Allied
Lane Hackers
Liberty Rogues
Friendly
Golden Chrysanthemums
Mandalorians MM~
The Independent Neuralnet Division
The Keepers K'Hara-
Neutral
Mollys
Bretonian Armed Forces
Bretonian Police Authority
Border World Exports Bowex
Bretonian Mining and Metals
Temporary Autonomous Zoners
Omicron Supply Industry
The Wilde Wilde
The Junker Congress
Unfriendly
Hellfire Legion
The Blood Dragons
Rheinland corporations
Kusari corporations
Liberty corporations
Hostile
Rheinland Lawfuls
Council
Colocnial Republik
Kusari Lawfuls Kempeitai
Liberty Lawfuls
The Order Order
Xeno Alliance
Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army
Gas Miner's Guild
Red Hessian Army
Independent Miner's Guild
ALL Gallic lawfuls and house corporations
Unioners
The Bounty Hunters Guild
The Bounty Hunters Guild Core
OOC:
Ships we are allowed to use:
Border Worlds
Civlian
ID/IFF:Freelancer
Names:all who is joined front of the name have to put OL|
Can you explain me, dear sir, what The Council has to do with a group which - given by the name - originates themselves from the Omicrons? On what do you base your hostility towards The Council and what is this "disaster" you want to claim revenge for?
I'm confused as well. The Council was never -in- the Omicrons, and the Colonials haven't been there for a long time either. You also look to ally yourself with the K'Hara - you might want to doublecheck that with their faction, being friendly to nomads on the Freelancer ID will not be possible, that rephack is set blood red - and that's not changing.
Wide awake in a world that sleeps, enduring thoughts, enduring scenes. The knowledge of what is yet to come.
From a time when all seems lost, from a dead man to a world, without restraint, unafraid and free.
Mostly retired Discovery member. May still visit from time to time.
I do not understand what this faction is about at all. So many things are simply wrong. Care to explain your faction's history in details without pushing random factions into place they dont belong to in the first place?
(05-02-2013, 08:06 PM)Killer Wrote: It was hundred years ago..who knows who and where was anyone.
Colonials were founded in 801 A.S. - that means 19 years before events of current mod. Council did not made contact with Sirius until 818 A.S.
(05-02-2013, 08:06 PM)Killer Wrote: It was hundred years ago..who knows who and where was anyone.
The Council has been secretly founded when King Louis IV disbanded the Mouvement de Liberation Gaulois, in 720 AS, merely a hundred years ago. In Gallia. They have made contact with Sirius in 818 AS. Until then, they were isolated and far from the Sirius sector. Far from the Omicrons. Far from anything you try to blame on them.
I know where The Council was by that time, and you would know too if you would have done a little research before pulling out something irrational to base your roleplay on. Looking for information here and there can help a lot.
When I first glanced at this, I suspected there would be some misunderstanding of timings. Seems I was right - as Thyrzul and Omicron have already mentioned, you'd only be able to have seen the Colonials in the last 20 years and the Council only in the last 2.
Also, the actual grievance that we inflicted on you could do with some more detail. Other than maybe the Gaians, these are the two factions that know most about having their homes trampled on and being driven out; hardly seems fitting for us to do it to you. Some extra detail about what you did for the hundreds of years beforehand, and of course what you will do just now rather than just attack us.
That grievance with us and in fact the entire diplomacy seems to have been copied from the Outcasts, so why not just use that ID? It would also allow you to do something in-game, as the Freelancer ID without a bounty board is rather useless for anything other than trading. Other than central Gallia for the Council, I'm fairly sure that the Outcasts overlap their ZoI with both factions anyway.
Would also allow you to use some of those Ranseurs...
(05-02-2013, 07:37 PM)Killer Wrote: Hostile
Colocnial Republik
If we're your main enemy, could you please spell it correctly?
"Colonial Republic"
Overall, definitely needs some work so someone has an idea of what you're doing here.