Not a bad effort actually, though it'd be good to see it textured. Maybe make it a little less square at the back. Just a glance, though this does give me personally a bit of hope that this mod is still advancing considering designs such as these are turning up. That's my two cents, good effort
Freelancer tends to make somewhat esoteric designs when the basis for freight haulers is an empty space into which to place cargo.
I would suggest making something warship-ish using your "cockpit" as a basis, maybe a gunship or destroyer. I will admit partialness to the Y-Wing fighter, though.
I like the cabin up front, but I think the cargo bays are too flat.
Perhaps a second, slightly smaller bay behind the first, then a fitting for a single train cargo pod, then engines ?
Thanks for the feedback, had some time today so made some changes, one thing led to another, I changed it up completely pretty much. Also rendered it from diff angles, textured this time. The front was modeled , thinking of a dragon head . Also I updated the links of course.