Job: Re-doing a logo

[nOmnomnOm]

@Anomander

Just a few things.
The A and the C are not the same level... just make sure they are on the same level and not one more up or down.
The F also should be in the middle and not off to the side.

Part of why this is is that the woman is at the side a little. If you move her more centered then it might change and be fixed.
However... it does look interesting when the woman is on the side more than in the middle of the triangle... so this just needs so working on and trial-and-error.

OR... just overlap the F with the leg more and down more the woman. that might be another result.

Just keep the letters in a good spot, regardless of the woman. it could overlap and look good.

OR... make the letters smaller.

Try it out please
Looks good so far. Just save your work and continue.


Edit:

I looked at it again. I think before in V3 the position of the woman was good... not so sure :S
Just look at it more.

@Ichiru

Looks good actually now.
Some more things that you can look at:
Right wing can have more grey outlines as the left one. try it out and see how it goes (though please save your work till now)
right top part of the wing should have the same kind of edge to it as the left top part. Also try it out though but jsut keep it a fine line.
the feet are good.

Also for the font... Try a bit smaller so it doesn't go overlapping anything. Just a little.

Just save your work beforehand becasue looks good now.

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[Ichiru]

Here's your changes

Big:


Small:


SVG: here

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[nOmnomnOm]

Ok @Ichiru thank you a lot! Looks great now.
Let me know here or pm me the price please

As for @Anomander , I will still buy yours so please continue! I'll be waiting

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[Anomander]

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[evanz]

is it me or does it look like theres a weird hump/growth on the left leg, and the left arm seems a bit "broken"?

[nOmnomnOm]

is it me or does it look like theres a weird hump/growth on the left leg, and the left arm seems a bit "broken"?

no the hump is the arm resting on the leg.

The "broken" part is actual;y her hair.


I'm going to think on this just to make sure i like everything. It looks really good and i am impressed... but i just want to line up all the versions.

[nOmnomnOm]

Alright @Anomander so... I'm going to have to bug you a bit more... sorry . I am just getting a bit picky right now.

Firstly, i really liked the touch-up cosmetic changes on v3-v1 . If you can do it again and perhaps wherever you think will look good, go for it! Make it look pretty
I think the wings will be enough... but I'd like to see if you come up with anything else. I think though that the triangle should be left as it is without cosmetics... unless you are going with a more 3D effect...
I dont know. Surprise me. I will reward you well for beauty and style.

Secondly, the latest version has great placement on the Fonts so that is good. What is only bugging me now is the placement of the woman. The latest version... is OK but when comparing to the other versions it is the least good one in terms of composition.... if you know what I mean. What irritates me the most is the head overlapping...

I would like to see a version with the position in V3 and a version with the position with V4.

I think after this it should be good. Feel free to show me what you can do in terms of cosmetics

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[Anomander]

v6_1

v6_2

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[nOmnomnOm]

@Anomander



Those are all the changes please...

-woman and letters black too thick.
-black at diamond too thin. revert back to V1. was much better
-Move woman so 2 reference lines align
-add cosmetic touches on wings that was on V3 before
-if you are adding shadow behind the woman then include it in the feet. the woman is supposed to be in front of the diamond

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