Conception is a 167 post thread of you talking to yourself, that's been going on since last year. For it to be going that long, have that much on it I thought it must be good. You certainly have put the work in.
The lack of format made it really hard to read, I don't mean BB-code I mean that the layout changes of thread to thread, I was following what appeared to be some sort of internal monologue but then became a conversation then a Captains log. This made things really confusing as there are no mechanics of transition between the three. I wanted to like it and I wanted to be able to read it.
Is there a reason as to why you have chosen to have the layout change so dramatically from post to post and not explained or motivated and change from scene to scene?