The things I would say to this is:
1) Join the already existing Liberty Rogues faction. Request to be set up under the DPL.
2) The people joining this particular faction would be better to join the LR to make it stronger
instead of fracturing the LR into two distinct groups. I think there's room in the DPL for what
you want to do (You'd have to talk this over with Del, just my hunch)
3) The ranks are just plain wrong. A pirate faction does not have Admirals or Fleet Admirals
or Commanders or even <strike>Cannon Fodder</strike> Ensigns. Those ranks stated are military ranks.
Totally inappropriate for a pirate faction.
4) Some of your sentences are broken and not finished.
Sovereign Wrote:Seek fun and you shall find it. Seek stuff to Q_Q about and you'll find that, too. I choose to have fun.
Well, you've put work into it...
But the thing is...we already have a long existing LR faction and part of that is DPL--the Democratic Peoples of Liberty and we do exactly the same thing that your faction would be doing.
Umm this idea already exists within the Rogues, The Democratic Peoples of Liberty already do all that. Except that we don't consider trade to be evil. Free trade is good, but the slave based economy is bad. Actually if you just looked at the LR faction status you'd see it.
Apart from the bugbear that you're basically doing something that's already being done and being done well.
I'm going to reiterate my point I state to any faction wishing to make home in Liberty, I'm sorry but Liberty does not -need- the attention. All th Pirate factions are filled and we get away with quite alot, without having to worry too much about issues, the Rp is getting better and it's becoming fun. Bretonia needs action and Kusari needs some too. So perhaps turning your eye to someplace that -needs- this kind of thing rather than overcrowding Liberty anymore than it already is...
Edit and it's Rogue not Rouge, you'll have one of our members yelling at you if you don't change it.
Saint Del is considered a holy healer of diseases of children, but also as a protector of cattle.
This is basically just the Democratic Peoples of Liberty (DPL) under a different name. If you RP well and are willing, we'd be happy to accept you into our ranks. Just post in the recruitment thread on the forums and we'll get back to you. But really, there is no need for this faction, sorry.
' Wrote:Edit and it's Rogue not Rouge, you'll have one of our members yelling at you if you don't change it.
*yells incomprehensibly for a few minutes*
Grammar National Socialist is not amused. Fix that up first, then join the DPL to get a better idea of what you're trying to do. If after spending some time there, you still think the NLF are both distinct and necessary, then go for it. Until then... no comment.