As for details... Just make a story that comes from your own heart and soul.... That's how i do myself. It comes like this.. I don't think it... It just get the heck out of my head
I can't give you more details as i'm not a good writer myself... But as soon you post your story i will definitly read it....
Myself got stories on my sig. Unfortunatly none of them flies a cruiser....
The beginning of the story was decent, but when you got into the part about Buffalo, it lost all its credibility...
First, Buffalo is HIDDEN in the badlands, it looks like all the rocks in there. it is a rock.
second, the two last sentences are enough to simply make you KOS to any of us... you don't create a cruier just to go around and blow stuff up only..
You will have to rethink your approach, right now your RP is not even a story, it seems more like a simple explanation about how you have gotten the ship only and how much people you killed and fought against.
if you want to get it then you can. you could be a inderpendent Lib crusier...that always works. but in my case i think liberty has to many members/players. what about all the other factions guys!!! Rienland! Betonia! Kuski(the japs)! most of them have less players in them factions compared to Liberty
Just buy the ship. If they don't want you to have itm then join the 512 or whateve they're called. or, RP with it and don't attack fighters in your cruiser