I think you should use the second or third one, and add another layer of those letter over itself, blurred and set on overlay style. Right now, the background words are really the only thing somewhat annoying me, even though it is an interesting idea. They stand out too much.
edit: in hindsight, the border for the first two kinda looks cheesy, so im redoing it. same for the "nebula" style cloud.
i r not satisfied. D:
i think the 2nd link is the best, why not take out the Stark RHI in the centre and instead use the lighting
effects that you have made to make RHI , so it highlights onto the background in a softer tone.
I have written a tutorial on how to make something like this if anyone is interested.
I am:Dbut you already know that. Also, I've made a little tutorial for rendering ships from game model files, if anyone's interested, throw a PM and I'll give you the link.