Any comments, feedback and general question are welcome, I post it here for now, since we do not have the number needed for posting in the Official Faction request and not the resources either, right now we need it up so members (possible members) can see what we are about
Right now for the BR we do not really care if their Sirian or Gallic, they're still annoyances in the Bloody Rose's eyes, but they wont be openly attacked.
i wouldnt take Unione Corse out of gallia. If you read their story they really do not have interests out there... they are quite open for attacks beyond the minefields.
Well, they aren't really, normal Unione Corse members, they are Pro-Council, cause of their will to destroy the crown and open the minefields to the rest of Sirius.
The reason the GRN and the Unione Corse get along is because we have the same isolationist policies. You don't want the Sirius Sector in Gallia because it affects business and your power - new players change the game you have been dominating a long time. This is evident in the first news report you posted.
The text is also a bit hard to read.
I'll have to review it again, but it looks pretty good so far. Kudos.
EDIT: And the person who wrote the backstory aswell... awesome...:P
The whole thing?
Thanks Sethy;)
And the back story, yeah it is awesome isn't it?
Kudos for that Seth, as you finalized it for me;)
' Wrote:The reason the GRN and the Unione Corse get along is because we have the same isolationist policies. You don't want the Sirius Sector in Gallia because it affects business and your power - new players change the game you have been dominating a long time. This is evident in the first news report you posted.
The text is also a bit hard to read.
I'll have to review it again, but it looks pretty good so far. Kudos.
Get along and get along, on the wiki and in game the GRN and Unione Corse doesn't get along at all, since they are incorruptible.
And you shouldn't see The Bloody Rose as a typical Unione Corse clan/group/faction, it has as its stated= "But our group will continue of gathering information on Sirius and seeking new business opportunities related to the new discoveries"
The Bloody Rose is just that part of the Corse that wishes this more then anything, let the other Corse members handle Gallic matters.
If you've read the story I posted a few posts ago, then you would get a slight idea of how it came that the Bloody Rose is in the position it is in.
And well, the text was supposed to be blood red, cause I wanted a theme over the entire proposal (for feedback), so it can be a little hard. For some, as for me:)
And thanks mate =)
' Wrote:I didn't read it, yet. But I will. But I must give kudos for such beautiful presentation of the new faction. Thats the thing that caught my eye first.