to be honest with you, I think you need to change:
1. Background to some more "wide" space scene.
2. The font and its placement on the signature. Perhaps add some FX to it.
3. Sharpen the model, use dodge/burn option to give it more volume.
4. BORDAH !!:)
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Agreed with Makc_RU about the details.
And also mate, I'd like to see your submission, of course if you like the pay, however its as much as I can afford at the moment, got bored of trading and I don't really need money either so eh..
Also about the "Sacred Chao" make it spin please:D
And also a different background and also maybe a rendered ship and guns, I did improve the pay:D
Evangelist if you're really gonna work on this a few things, maybe try your best to take off the white pixels and add in a nice background, would be all I wanted.