[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters

[Jeremy Hunter]

Change the rating to X...might be a thought.

That was beautifully written Prysin. Her background is well thought out too ^_^

Though the imprisonment part is extreme.

Funny thing, I was going to do something similar, but not anywhere near extreme as that, for my Navy char's background.

Now I'll seem like a copycat X_X curse my slowness.

And that picture was cool.

Keep it up.

I can see why she wants Outcasts dead.

I wager she would like both Crete and Malta burn?

Rating out of 10

10/10

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[Prysin]

Thanks for the rating, glad you like it. Last part leading up to CR and some insight in CR daily life will come later. Most likely, ill make a separate "Diary" thread once i finish this part

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[Jeremy Hunter]

10/10

Nice intro.

Cant wait for the Diary.

Been awhile since there has been a story like that.

Evangeline is the other good one...

Keep it up!

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

Need to fix Sidious story too, so the next chapter, which will revolve around the life as a CR, wont be started just yet

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[Jeremy Hunter]

Need to fix Sidious story too, so the next chapter, which will revolve around the life as a CR, wont be started just yet

Ok.

I'll take the time to add to my story and/or start another.

I'll be waiting.

Keep it up!

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

meh, tried to fix sidious's story, but its so long since i worked on it that i forgot my initial editing plans...

Next Chapter of Eve's story is coming out soon™

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[Jeremy Hunter]

9/10.

Bit boring, but hey.

There is always a bit of boredom.

Keep it up :)

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

9/10.

Bit boring, but hey.

There is always a bit of boredom.

Keep it up :)

:(

Next bit coming soon™

fortunately, its still not closed or invisid as i feared it would be.... oh well, ill keep it going until i get told otherwise.

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[Prysin]

updated Eve's story.

Please give some feedback on it, especially grammar vise or if i keep using too difficult/weird word choises

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[Jeremy Hunter]

Yeahh...

Offically Prysin, expect me to steal that Nyx.

15/10.

All is good, no worries!

Keep it up!

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.