Bomber Model (V2)

[Ximen_Benitez]

So, I was having a little competition with Jazz, except he had to go... but he'll probably still win later.

I just made up this ship that would probably fit the bomber category the best. However, it probably still has a ton of work to be done. I'm just not sure what to do, so here it is, does anybody have suggestions?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6950/bomberva2.png

Here is the second version, now what do you think? I added more detail etc etc.'

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4020/bomberv2om3.png

Edit: Image too big, I guess you'll have to click a link, sorry.

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[asterix]

Wow that is so good i lke the whole design. All you need is some really good textures to make it 10 times better.

But keep up the great work.

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[13CentKiller]

Sweet as!

Man, I have to try doing this again...I can't stand every man and his dog being able to do this!:P

May I make a suggestion?
Try making it a bit more pointy towards the back, and give it a hull. or just give it a hull.

It looks a bit flat. The torps look sweet as!:D

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[pim]

Makes me quite think of the X-shuttle...

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OK for gentle RP, OK for gentle PvP too. What do you prefer ?
Hurk hurk hurk...

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John Smith(independant trader, ex-contract killer on Manhattan)(Heavy Tanker)

[Ximen_Benitez]

Ok, i'll mess around with the hull some more, see if I can get it better. Yes, the back end needs to be worked on, it is very flat and un exciting... I'll post a link when I edit it enough for you to see.

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[Bjorn]

Fine concept... Maybe too flat? Also i cannot link it to any house/faction.

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ISS-Zapotec

[Seth Karlo]

A nice model, only one problem I can see: It links to nothing else in FL... It might be an X Shuttle 2, perhaps?

I don't think it looks much like a Bomber, more like a Freighter... Perhaps making it look more streamlined...?

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[Ximen_Benitez]

VERSION 2 NOW POSTED

Check first post, I think it's improved a bit, do you?

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[Seth Karlo]

Now it doesn't have a cockpit....

Also, try making the wings for streamlined...It still looks more like a freighter than a bomber to me.

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[Bjorn]

Seht is right. It does not look like bomber... Nor freighter since it seems to lack cargo space.

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