(0)-Location: Orbtial Spa and Cruise Foregin Cabinet
(0)-Sender ID: Danielle Collins, Co-Chairman
(0)-Recipient ID: Bretonian War Cabinet
(0)-Security Level: High
(0)-Subject: A new contract
Good day very esteemed members of the Bretonian War Cabinet
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Good day, my name is Danielle Collins and I am the Second CEO of tis company, yet I am the very first member and the head of the Forigin Relationships Cabinet. We are here today to bright forth something I know that the Navy long wanted but they were holding back from the Treaty of Curacao, but we with to give the Bretonian Armed Forced to bring one desired warship class and as many dog-fight vessel class ships down in Cortez to be actively a strategy base, but only for strategy, hence my point and our offer here. We wish to directly support both navies that are at war with the Gallic Expansion, yet we fell the most love and compassion for the Bretonian case, even if we are at base a Libertonian Corpe, you have lost more then any of us together
Now what I am offering here I am sure you did not thought this comes for free. I am sure that for what we ask, we think this is fare deal since we give you one of chance option that not many see, and we are ready to brake a Treaty that was long done before many of us. Now please allow me to bring forth to you the Treaty of Tearfall which includes the terms and regulations of both of our requests and the granted permission over look the Treaty of Curaco. The Orbital Spa and Cruise is open to any kind of chance asked by the Bretonian War Cabinet, since we do wish to have your option on the very best terms for both parties. We seek nothing but to aid and help where we can
Terms and Conditions for the entry of warship in Cortez:
1.1 The Bretonian War Cabinet is ready to hold a promiss that the ship they will send will not open fire under any given circumstance in a 60k sphere around Planet Cortez. Under the circumstance of this rule being broken the following sanctions will be applied under the severity of the act:
2.0 If the ship only open fire the Bretonian War Cabinet will be announce and we hope to see good terms.
2.1 If there is any kind of casualty even minore damage to a civilian which is under the enemy of Bretonia will be ignore, hence we allow the ship to fire in self-defence at any given time. If any other casualty or death is implicated we are allowed to revoke the ship permission temporary or even permanent.
1.2 They Bretonian War Cabinet will assure us that there will no other capital ship entering the system , however due to the severity of war we are able to give permission for the Bretonian Warships only and under the identification of Bretonian Armed Forces to set halt or even pass to relocate or even have repairs to be done.
1.3 We are gonna be able to ask the Dog-craft vessel to help and assure at any given time to help us.
Terms and regulations for our request form the Bretonian War Cabinet
1.22 We hereby ask to have complete controle of a sphere which will be 25k diameter.
{1.233. This is special rule since we will allow any snub fight to occure anywhere and at any cost, even near planet Curcao}
1.23 Due to this request we ask for the whole command and the possibility of feeing any kind of spatial installation In this very sphere.
1.24 Under all the condition, due to this we are open for the War Cabinet, to give us conditions. We will be hiring ourselves to give out a montly fee and or even yearly fee for this sphere.
With the best regards,
Danielle Collins,
Awaiting your swiftest responce
The Bretonian War Cabinet, alongside selected ministers, have sat down to discuss your proposal, and have asked me to represent them in this. I'm not sure if you are aware of your predecessors role in the revision of the Treaty of Curacao, but they too brought up an extension to Orbital controlled space. The point raised by many involved parties was that this would prove detrimental to the war effort. You are a tourism based company, not a military based fighting force. Your predecessors agreed that this was all too true, and promptly dropped their bid for a revised control zone.
Now I'm sure your aware that the war has not ended thus far, but I will be kind enough to go through the problematic points with you in detail.
"1.1 The Bretonian War Cabinet is ready to hold a promiss that the ship they will send will not open fire under any given circumstance in a 60k sphere around Planet Cortez"
I'm sorry to tell you the War Cabinet would make no assurances of this, ever. If the enemies of Bretonia are present, we (in the form of the Armed Forces, Intelligence Service, and Police Authority) would reserve the right to uphold Bretonian law in the zones dictated by the Treaty of Curacao.
"2.0 If the ship only open fire the Bretonian War Cabinet will be announce and we hope to see good terms.
2.1 If there is any kind of casualty even minore damage to a civilian which is under the enemy of Bretonia will be ignore, hence we allow the ship to fire in self-defence at any given time. If any other casualty or death is implicated we are allowed to revoke the ship permission temporary or even permanent."
These two points. I'm afraid the Armed Forces, Police Authority and Intelligence Service will not stand idly by whilst those considered friendly or neutral by Bretonia are attacked in space in or on the Bretonian border. This is unacceptable in the eyes of House Bretonia.
"1.2 They Bretonian War Cabinet will assure us that there will no other capital ship entering the system , however due to the severity of war we are able to give permission for the Bretonian Warships only and under the identification of Bretonian Armed Forces to set halt or even pass to relocate or even have repairs to be done.
1.3 We are gonna be able to ask the Dog-craft vessel to help and assure at any given time to help us."
The Bretonian Capital class vessels are a requirement for the war effort. I have spoken to the Minister of Defence and Fleet Admiral, and both have assured me that "the security wing of a corporation of any size will not stand against the Gallic War Machine. To allow this would be to open our doors to the Gauls, and to welcome them with open arms". I'm sure you can understand that we may never agree to this, not so long as Bretonia stands proud.
"1.22 We hereby ask to have complete controle of a sphere which will be 25k diameter. "
This may be discussed amongst all the signatories of the revised Treaty of Curacao after the war.
"1.23 Due to this request we ask for the whole command and the possibility of feeing any kind of spatial installation In this very sphere."
To transfer command from military to corporate would be a great tactical disadvantage. There is no way the House of Bretonia could accept this, nor we would ask any of the officers and enlisted men of Bretonia to follow this willingly. I'm sorry, but this is asking far to much.
I'm afraid, as you can plainly see, your proposed treaty is denied by House Bretonia. You ask some things which, at the height of war, are quite frankly ridiculous and would endanger our people. We cannot agree to this at this time, or ever in it's current form. We will agree to discussing this at a undetermined time after the war with Gallia has concluded.
Thank you for filing this request. Your work in Bretonia is greatly appreciated.
On behalf of Her Majesty's Government,
Hayley Winchester Crown Representative, Liasons Secretary
Bretonian Government