*OOC*OK every one this is my first time doing this so don't pay me out....
It all happened two year's ago. My crew Vanquish, Monaro, Sean & I were transporting some mining materials 2 one of the UN know systems. We were traveling at a high rate of speed, cause we were running a little of schedule. Than we came under fire. We thought it was the Corsairs(Cant spell it). But it wasn't, they were a sorta blueish gray blob sorta ship. after trying 2 fend them off we succeeded, but we were critically damaged. I reached for the controls, i was dazed in the head and it was hard 2 c. Sean was passed out on the flaw with a wet patch on his pants. Vanquish was badly injured but could still stand, so i asked him 2 take the controls i radioed for help. I was half way throught our message, WAM another fleet of those blobs apeard. But they had a battle ship looking thing. They attacked us again, we did not fight. we surrender, we new we had no chance. As the bored the ship, I saw out of the corner of my eye, one of those Mythical Christal ship's. I taped Monaro on the shoulder and sad look at that. We both looked. there was nothing there. Monaro said "what man i don't see nothing". Sean woke up from his moment on the floor, and stood next 2 me. Than the aliens walked in, and what do u know, Sean passed out again. They stun-ed us with some funny looking gun.
***5 hours later***
I open my eyes. Every thing was blurred. I got up on one elbow and rubbed my eyes. I looked over 2 the other operating tables. I saw Vanquish and Sean, but i could not see Monaro. I sat up on the Bench and looked around. Than i saw some weird captciuls. I walked up 2 one and rubbed the fog of the screen than i saw something i Neva thought i would see in a long time. Monaro was in the captchal, with half his head cut open. I sat on the floor with my hand over my mouth, and i started to cry. As i was crying i thought 2 my self, what is going to happen 2 us, who are thees people, why did they attack us, so Meany questions to be awarest. Than i herd foot steps coming towards us. I wiped the tears from my eyes got up breathed some fog on to Monaros Captcual, and lade down on my bench. As i lay down on the bench i could hear talking. First the were talking a nother languige i had neva herd. Than they started to talk English. I only heard a few words and they were. C'Tan, Enlightenment & Kill them. The foot steps stopped In front of my bench. One of the people placed her hand on my for head. It was cold and slimy. Than the alarm went off. "WEEEOER WEEEEOER WEEEEORE"!!! Than some voice came over the loudspeaker speaking in a different language. **Thinks in mind**I noticed that i did not feal the same like something had been added 2 me.. Than i come out of day dreaming. The two people that were in hear ran out of the room and up some stars. Than i thought this is the time 2 escape. I jumped up and ran towards Vanquish, and shacked him til he woke up. **Vanquish speaking** "OMG what a head ake". What happened is every one alright" **Me speaking** "i don't Know where we are, but there is no time to ask questions". "Wake up Sean I'm going 2 get Monaro." I ran over to Monaros captcuil. and started pressing random buttons on his control pad. It finally opened. He fell out of the captcual, i caught him and picked him up. Vanquish had just waken Sean up from his slumber. I told Sean and Vanquish to follow me. The Base station was shaking, bits of piping and wires were falling every were. We were running up one of the main corridors. I looked out the window as we were running. It was the Christal ship agan. They were absolutely destroying this Station. I said to Vanquish we need to find the hanger and get outta hear. I saw a sign that sad hanger. we ran down that passageway. And than we were in the hanger. I saw a little armored transport. I pointed at it and ran towards it. Alian looking things were running 2 ship and flying them outta hear. We ran towards the ship. We got in it and Vanquish started up the engines. i Placed Monaro on one of the beds and ran to the controls. "Vanquish Get us outta hear"!!!! We few out the rear exit, and realized that we were on the lost battle star. I ran towards the back of the ship so i could get one more glimpse at those legendary Christal ship. The battle star was about 2 blow up. The Christal ships stopped shooting.. POOF the disappeared before my eyes...........
**To Be Continued**
Enjoy my story. Please forgive my spelling
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
Quite a gripping tale, if I say so myself. My only criticism is perhaps a bit more to the story (like events at the station). I must know more........
Lol, good job.
Returning with a Vengeance June 2007 Sirius Universal Time.
We are coming.
Characters:
BDBC-Yamato - Talarca Light Battlecruiser
BDBS-Musashi - Kusari Heavy Battleship (to be stolen)
BDF-Shinano - Blood Dragon Fighter *
FL-Monarch (to be commissioned) **
</span> The 大和, Battlecruiser Yamato, is Admiral Yamato's personal yacht and primary combat ship.
<span style='font-size:10pt;line-height:100%'> The 武蔵, Battleship Musashi, is Admiral Yamato's command center and mobile base of operations for his personal fleet. * The 信濃, Fighter Shinano, is Admiral Yamato's personal fighter and reconnaisance ship, used for backup purposes. ** The Monarch is a freelance freighter captained by Bretonian Navy veteran, William Earnshaw Jr.
Lol thank you. I will add some stuff to the story a lil bit l8r
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
Can you please change there "was a whole fleet of the crystal ship." To "One of the crystal ships was attacking the station."
There is no fleet of crystal ships. Also, they do not travel in packs. They don't even have intelligent life on board.. There are only a few crystal ships, not a fleet. Thats the only thing wrong with that post.
Also, try downloading Mozilla Firefox Beta 1, it contains a spell check that will show you what you misspelled. It'll make it easier for everyone to read.
LOL HAHA. well thats in the Next story lol Onca. Dab in fixed the post
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
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