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[Val]

I've decided to make a memories of my main character in Disco, Yann Blackwings for the fun and for the RP.

All the critics on everything in the memories, the colors, the form, the readability, the comprehension, problems or defaults, suggestions are welcomed! And do not hesitate! I'm hear to hear your thinking, so i'm opened.

I hope you will enjoy, and appreciate the Yann's adventures!

[Yann Blackwings memories]

[Val]

Second log posted! Good reading! And do not hesitate to write some critics about this in this thread.

[Val]

Updated!

[Val]

Updated!

[Val]

New update!

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