Everything was looking fine until we reached the part "Our standing to the kingdom of Gallia is not special, the pay a good price, are friendly, and that's it. We don't want to interfere your war with them".
This set alarm bells ringing.
Do we take it that you want to supply, Gallia with Rheinland manufactured Weapons, by passing through Bretonia? If this is the case, we are surprised that you would seriously believe that the Bretonian people would be accepting of this.
Until we receive 100% assurances that this is not the case your Application has been:
DENIED