I'd like some feedback

[Clarkie]

Hey folks, if any of you have the time I'd like some feedback on a freelancer I created.

In game, the character is called 'Bacchus', and its a freelancer tagged and ID'd Kusari Explorer, armed with a mix of zoner and basic GB weaponry.

The background to the ship and more importantly its captain, Erasmus Fontayne can be found here:
Character Bio

[masternerdguy]

Hey folks, if any of you have the time I'd like some feedback on a freelancer I created.

In game, the character is called 'Bacchus', and its a freelancer tagged and ID'd Kusari Explorer, armed with a mix of zoner and basic GB weaponry.

The background to the ship and more importantly its captain, Erasmus Fontayne can be found here:
Character Bio

seems fine.:ylove:

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[Clarkie]

Thanks dude, anyone got anything else to add? I aim to expand upon it, perhaps in the form of a journal through his senior years.

[masternerdguy]

Thanks dude, anyone got anything else to add? I aim to expand upon it, perhaps in the form of a journal through his senior years.

i think it's well covered.

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