Feedback on my new rp

[Heartless]

So as some of you may know, I recently decided to step down as Grand Admiral of the Order. Although I'm still affiliated with the Order|, I no longer lead it as the time and dedication it takes to lead a faction just isn't available to me anymore. Plus it's a hasstle and stressful, especially with all the stuff going on with the Order.
Rand Seith (Ophidian) has become my succesor and I'm sure he will do a great job in leading the Order. Lots of good stuff is coming up.
Anyways, my 17 or so characters were all cut down to about 4. As my "exit" out of the Order, I ended up rp'ing this:
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...pid=648984&
Essentually, the Khonshu and the crew, especially Sius Malacos, is not infected by Nomads. The Khonshu is fighting a war within itself and Malacos is fighting for his mind. RP'ing a half infested Osiris is... new I guess, but it's been working out well so far.
So here I ask for all of you who have met me in this state, to please post your feedback on how things are going with this rp. In general I think it's going pretty well, there are Order players who wish to save Sius Malacos, and othes who wish to destroy him for the greater good. I do plan on writing a bit more in that story and work on things in-game as well.
And by feedback, I also mean of the idea in it's own. How is it? Is it feasible? What should I do? Improve? Any comments and constructive criticism is very welcome.
So yeah, have at it!

ps: would it be weird if I changed the ship's name from Khonshu to Khon'Shu to emphasize the Nomadic part of it? So far it's all order tagged and id'd and weapons are all order etc.

-Swissy

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SwissScorch --> Heartless

[Sprolf]

I think it's pretty brilliant, personally.
I look forward to seeing you in action.


And about the name.
Why not change it completely?
[That name was perfect for my ship.]

But, in all seriousness, that would be an interesting touch. I'd go for it.

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[Heartless]

well I have re-named the Khonshu to Sviz'Ra. I'll add in the story how that happens. The name Khonshu is all yours if you so wish:)

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SwissScorch --> Heartless

[Sprolf]

Awesome.
I think I'll take that name right now...

Thank you very much.

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[Heartless]

oh, so you're Khonsu? hehe, just caused some confusion in-game right now:)But it's cleared up.

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SwissScorch --> Heartless

[Sprolf]

Ah, right.
I'm going to clear that up, or at least try to, using various avenues.

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[cobraSting]

RP idea is great and the ingame RP was great as well. However, I don't really understand why you didn't blast me or anything when I tried to follow you into Omicron Iota with my gunboat.

[Heartless]

well I'm not one to shoot before talking first of all.

I recall saying something along the lines of human and fleeing, basically telling you to get away before nommies decide to blast you up. And you did so I think it worked:)

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SwissScorch --> Heartless