I've opened this topic to give people a chance to do some feedback on the story I have started to write.
I am writing it because of myself mostly, but having few readers would certainly inspire me to do more. It is good to have your work appreciated, it pushes you forward.
But if I have proven some distaste in my roleplay in game with either Mentira, Seaserpent or any of my characters, you could also post that here, criticism (not whining) is always appreciated.
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