Cool, looks nice. I dunno about the transparent lines, even though I know they're intentional. Doesn't look very natural, imo. Maybe make each line smaller than the next so that near the center of the image, there stops being some? (Playing with the thicknesses, that is.)
EDIT: Yeah, we lost pretty much all our members and therefore official status. We never really seemed to have a strong foothold in this community, unfortunately. (I'm setting up the faction elsewhere though, hence the sig.)
THEY TOLD ME I COULD BE ANYTHING SO I BECAME A SIGNATURE PLS HLP