' Wrote:I wanted to ask for some feedback on my new creation. Before you say so, I know, Dervin is ugly. I intended that. I do feel that his head is a bit awkward though, suggestions on how to fix it would be welcome.
Comments, constructive criticisms?
Edit: Ohh, I already know I want to widen it out for less clutter, that will make me happier anyway. Hair needs fixed too. What else?
His head might be less awkward if the man had a neck.He's a floating head!:D
Maybe think about a subtle bit of texture on the ship windscreen?As it is it's just a flat grey.