Much better. Now that the render is clear, it has a nice contrast going on between the cyan and the grey of the background. All in all, this looks very good, especially for something done in Paint.NET (no offence intended, of course). I can see this looking good on top of a transmission, I think.
EDIT: Changed my wording to something hopefully clearer now that I can use a keyboard to do so.
(I'm the light at the end of the tunnel? Must be a very dark tunnel indeed =\.)
THEY TOLD ME I COULD BE ANYTHING SO I BECAME A SIGNATURE PLS HLP