' Wrote:Character picture - awesome
Smoke - cool, though not completely realistic. Not hardly transparent enough.
Blood - good but how the hell is it splattered all over the smoke - which isn't solid - but none on him or the gun?
Text - good, placed well, appropriate font. The Smokeone name really bothers me though. Looks like two english words put together, not italian or hispanic at all. Could've at least made it Smoconi or something if you didn't want to use an actual italian or spanish word.
Thanks for the input mate, really appreciate it.
Oh and about the name, its a lolwut name. It is supposed to sound stupid. I mean look at my character name: Fat Penguino xD
That name Smokeone is a parody of the name Corleone (God Father...) and the excessive spamming of smoke smileys by Tony (Lucas) in skype.